怎麼寫英語 邏輯與思維碰撞 百花爭豔便成春 模板範文交鋒一花不成春

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欲問秋果何所累——英語寫作得高分——實現學生夢想、家長期盼：邏輯春風思維來，請看如下英語作文。

以“To share the joy at how to make oneself understood in English successfully”（分享一個人如何用英語成功表達思想的快樂）為題，寫一篇英語作文。

Being able to improve greatly in English， you would be expected to put English into practice by listening to English accurately and/or speaking English clearly， together with to take an interest in writing English as well as reading English to follow your teachers or friends and/or foreigners。

This helps you get friendly relationships developed socially as well as culturally between you and them in future， encouraging you to focus on educational practice and theory and make it easy to understand custom and practice on their different views。

In terms of the knowledge-acquiring program， you as one of English-learning students would concentrate on your winning English popularity with your classmates interested in English。 By means of this， I shall find you good at making yourselves understood in English。

Having been regarded as being one of the excellent English learners， you will have a strongly honorary sense in the cheerfully-minded but steady-going teamwork， in which to get excellently skilled in communicating with each at face-to-face talk in English。 Combined with this， you are very experienced in dealing with the public-culture and -education affairs。 That keeps you active in cooperating with some English-learning partners in having an exchange of view on topics well in English。

Becoming friendly with them in achieving an English-in-use progress， you would help them work hard at offering an excellent service to them made a success today in English， as is to hold in progress practically。

In getting on well with your friends， you will set up a good working relation with them on learning English by English-speaking， -listening to， or -writing practice， which is of the kind help greatly to you in as follows。

They comes to that you attend some lectures and have English evening party， as well as English corner， letting you acquire a good knowledge and take pleasure to make you understood well in English。These are considered especially right of you as one of Top-A students to do good job in English。

You shall re-start benefits in having English knowledge acquired by delivering speech on learning strong points a lot from each other。 Accepting their challenge， you will find you greatly wised in asking those for questions and broad-minded quickly in reply to ones from them。 To find a use for English， you would be expected to make valuable comments on above practice in favor with you， to my delight。

This， you will find pleasant to improve in essential English。 So achievable would remain your English that you will renew its benefits， having been enabled to develop proficiency in its practical use enjoyably by studying English mutually。 About this， you would grow in confidence， being perhaps awarded some prizes to lucky winners who are well known to all。

To raise English level by turning intellectual climates favorable frequently to you， these encourage you to make great progress in English so much that you are asked to attend forum or conference， one that is composed entirely of native-tongue English-speaking students together with their teachers， abroad， etc。

The above makes you understood excellently in English， proving popular with listeners and viewers to find much favor with you。 As this shall lead you to believe， your dream could come true to improve in your English， and so could I。

上述英語作文是依據以下條件寫的

為了交流學習英語經驗、提高學習效率，某《英語學習報》正在舉辦以“how to make oneself understood in English”為題的徵文比賽，而寫作上述英語作文。

上述英語作文可能會被認為：有厚度、有內涵，行文連貫、語言得體、內容充實、符合邏輯。英語作文能展示學生寫作英語成果，享受英語寫作的成就感，暢享用非母語詮釋內心世界和外部世界的非凡能力，享受心靈“雙飛”——飛躍本土、飛翔世界的快樂。享受“雙飛”的快樂滿足英語寫作質量提升，實現學生夢想家長期盼寫作英語分數得高分。

總結：

上述英語作文沒有“模板和套作”的痕跡（如“in my opinion， firstly， secondly… For one thing…For another thing…On the one hand…On the other hand…”）而具有6至10類不同結構的邏輯單句。

由5種英語邏輯句式所組成，計37類邏輯單句，簡稱“5。37”；透過特殊符號和語法形式表示的邏輯詞語分2類共70種，簡稱：“2。70”。這些都是圍繞“英語是邏輯語言，邏輯是英語寫作的靈魂”原理而安排的。上述英語作文寫作真正詮釋了：“邏輯與思維碰撞，百花爭豔便成春；模板與範文交鋒一花不成春”之真諦！