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The Champa Flower 金色花
（by 泰戈爾）
Supposing I became a champa flower， just for fun， and grew on a branch high up that tree and shook in the wind with laughter and danced upon the newly budded leaves， would you know me， mother？
假如我變成一朵金色花，只是為了好玩，長在那棵樹的高枝上，笑哈哈地在風中搖擺，又在新生的樹葉上跳舞，媽媽，你會認識我麼？
You would call， “Baby， where are you？” and I should laugh to myself and keep quite quiet。
你要是叫道：“孩子，你在哪裡呀？”我暗暗地在那裡匿笑，卻一聲兒不響。
I should slyly open my petals and watch you at your work。
我要悄悄地開放花瓣兒，看著你工作。
When after your bath， with wet hair spread on your shoulders， you walked through the shadow of the champa tree to the little court where you say your prayers， you would notice the scent of the flower， but not know that it came from me。
當你沐浴後，溼發披在兩肩，穿過金色花的林蔭，走到你做禱告的小庭院時，你會嗅到這花的香氣，卻不知道這香氣是從我身上來的。
When after the midday meal， you sat at the window reading Ramayana， and the tree‘s shadow fell over your hair and yourlap。 I should fling my wee little shadow on to the page of your book， just where you were reading。
當你吃過中飯，坐在窗前讀《羅摩衍那》，那棵樹的陰影落在你的頭髮與膝上時，我便要投我的小小的影子在你的書頁上，正投在你所讀的地方。
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